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Most OH/IR stars in the inner Galactic bulge form a uniform group with peaked CO brightness distributions and soft-parabola line profiles.

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load-bearing objection This paper classifies 77 OH-maser-selected bulge AGB stars into four categories using new ALMA CO data, but the selection likely biases toward high mass-loss objects so the groups may not represent typical O-rich AGB properties. the 2 major comments →

arxiv 2605.26605 v1 pith:UMHOQFVL submitted 2026-05-26 astro-ph.SR astro-ph.GA

OH/IR stars in the inner Galactic bulge: I. Colour, CO line, and stellar light curve characteristics

H. Olofsson , T. Khouri , S. Muller , R. Unnikrishnan , M.A.T. Groenewegen , J.A.D.L. Blommaert , E. De Beck , J.H. Kastner
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M. Maercker N. Patel N. Ryde B.A. Sargent S. Srinivasan W.H.T. Vlemmings
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The paper studies mass-loss properties of 77 O-rich AGB stars in the inner bulge, chosen solely for strong OH 1612 MHz maser emission. ALMA and APEX observations of multiple CO isotopologue lines, combined with infrared colors and light curves, allow the stars to be sorted into four categories with distinct circumstellar traits. A large majority share sharply peaked brightness distributions and soft-parabola line profiles, while the remainder display extended or complex structures and high-velocity wings. These patterns trace how mass loss and its geometry change near the tip of the AGB in a dense stellar environment.

Core claim

Based on mid-infrared colour, CO line, and near-infrared variability characteristics, the objects were divided into four categories of distinct stellar and/or circumstellar properties. A majority of the objects form a homogenous group with sharply, centrally peaked BDs and LPs of the soft-parabola type, while the rest show extended and complex BDs and/or LPs with high-velocity wings. The C18O line and ALMA continuum detection rates vary significantly between the categories. CO line emission is also detected from interaction zones where the expanding circumstellar gas meets the interstellar medium.

What carries the argument

Four-category division of stars according to mid-infrared colour, CO line brightness distributions and profiles, and near-infrared variability.

Load-bearing premise

The 77 stars selected only by the presence and strength of OH maser emission give an unbiased sample of O-rich AGB mass-loss properties in the inner bulge.

What would settle it

If additional high-resolution imaging or kinematic data show that the four categories share identical mass-loss rates and envelope geometries rather than distinct physical differences, the classification would not reflect intrinsic stellar or circumstellar distinctions.

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If this is right

  • Detection rates of C18O lines and ALMA continuum emission differ markedly across the four categories.
  • CO emission appears in zones where circumstellar gas interacts with the interstellar medium.
  • Line intensity ratios and kinematic features separate the categories in consistent ways.
  • The majority group traces a common pattern of mass loss for O-rich AGB stars in the inner bulge.

Where Pith is reading between the lines

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  • The uniform category may correspond to a stable phase of spherical mass loss before geometry changes set in.
  • High-velocity wings in the minority groups could mark the onset of asymmetric outflows or binary interactions.
  • Comparing these categories with similar samples outside the bulge would test whether dense stellar environments alter the observed mass-loss patterns.

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Referee Report

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Summary. The paper presents ALMA and APEX observations of CO rotational lines and continuum emission, combined with existing mid-IR photometry and near-IR light curves, for a sample of 77 OH 1612 MHz maser-selected AGB stars in the inner Galactic bulge. The objects are classified into four categories on the basis of mid-IR color, CO line morphology (brightness distributions and line profiles), and variability characteristics. A majority are described as homogeneous with centrally peaked BDs and soft-parabola LPs, while the minority show extended/complex BDs or LPs with high-velocity wings; detection rates of C18O and continuum also differ between categories. The work is framed as characterizing mass-loss geometry and kinematics transformations at the AGB tip.

Significance. If the reported category distinctions hold after accounting for selection, the multi-transition CO data and direct comparisons of BD/LP properties across a sizable, equidistant sample supply concrete observational constraints on circumstellar envelope evolution in O-rich AGB stars. The detection of CO emission from interaction zones with the ISM is an additional concrete result. The value is reduced by the lack of explicit checks on whether the categories are independent of the maser-based selection criterion.

major comments (2)
  1. [Abstract; sample selection paragraph] Abstract and sample-selection description: the sample is defined solely by the existence and strength of OH 1612 MHz maser emission, yet the four categories are presented as reflecting intrinsic stellar/circumstellar differences without any reported test for correlation between category membership and maser flux or line strength. If such a correlation exists, the claimed homogeneity of the majority group and the minority features with high-velocity wings could be selection artifacts rather than evolutionary stages; this directly affects the inference of mass-loss transformations.
  2. [Category comparison section] Category comparison paragraphs: the statement that C18O line and ALMA continuum detection rates 'vary significantly between the categories' is used to support distinct properties, but no quantitative thresholds, error estimates on the rates, or control for possible distance or sensitivity variations within the bulge sample are provided to establish that the differences are not driven by the same selection effects that define the sample.

Simulated Author's Rebuttal

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We thank the referee for the careful review and constructive feedback on potential selection effects. We address each major comment below and will revise the manuscript to include the requested checks and quantifications.

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  1. Referee: [Abstract; sample selection paragraph] Abstract and sample-selection description: the sample is defined solely by the existence and strength of OH 1612 MHz maser emission, yet the four categories are presented as reflecting intrinsic stellar/circumstellar differences without any reported test for correlation between category membership and maser flux or line strength. If such a correlation exists, the claimed homogeneity of the majority group and the minority features with high-velocity wings could be selection artifacts rather than evolutionary stages; this directly affects the inference of mass-loss transformations.

    Authors: We agree that an explicit test is needed to confirm the categories are independent of the maser-based selection. The categories rely on mid-IR colors, CO brightness distributions/line profiles, and near-IR variability, which are distinct observables. In the revised manuscript we will add a new figure or table comparing OH maser flux and line strength distributions across the four categories, together with a statistical test (e.g., KS or Anderson-Darling) to quantify any correlation. This will directly address whether the reported distinctions could be selection artifacts. revision: yes

  2. Referee: [Category comparison section] Category comparison paragraphs: the statement that C18O line and ALMA continuum detection rates 'vary significantly between the categories' is used to support distinct properties, but no quantitative thresholds, error estimates on the rates, or control for possible distance or sensitivity variations within the bulge sample are provided to establish that the differences are not driven by the same selection effects that define the sample.

    Authors: We acknowledge the need for quantitative support. The revised section will report binomial or Poisson error estimates on the detection rates, specify the 3-sigma sensitivity thresholds applied to non-detections, and note that all targets lie at comparable distances in the inner bulge (as stated in the paper), with uniform ALMA array configurations and integration times minimizing sensitivity variations. These additions will allow readers to assess the statistical significance of the rate differences. revision: yes

Circularity Check

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No circularity: purely observational classification with no derivations or self-referential predictions

full rationale

The paper performs an empirical classification of 77 OH-maser-selected AGB stars using ALMA CO line data, continuum, and existing photometry to define four categories based on mid-IR colour, line morphologies, and light-curve properties. No equations, fitted parameters, or predictions are derived; the categories are direct observational groupings, and the sample selection criterion (OH 1612 MHz maser strength) is stated explicitly without any subsequent debiasing step that would create a self-referential loop. No self-citations are invoked as load-bearing uniqueness theorems or ansatzes. The analysis remains self-contained against external benchmarks (ALMA/APEX observations and archival photometry) and does not reduce any claim to its own inputs by construction.

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Paper is observational; no free parameters, axioms, or invented entities are introduced. Categories are defined empirically from the data.

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Stars on the asymptotic giant branch (AGB) play important roles in a number of astronomical contexts. To quantify these roles, it is necessary to establish the mass-loss characteristics of stars as they evolve up and beyond the AGB. We used an equidistant sample of 77 AGB stars in the inner Galactic bulge, selected on the existence and strength of OH1612\,MHz maser emission, to obtain information on the mass loss of O-rich AGB stars, and on its transformations in geometry and kinematics that occur at the tip of the AGB. Observations of circumstellar lines from several rotational transitions of $^{12}$CO, $^{13}$CO, and C$^{18}$O were performed with the Atacama Large Millimeter/submillimeter Array (ALMA), and, for a sub-sample, with the Atacama Pathfinder EXperiment telescope (APEX). The ALMA observations also provide continuum data. Existing infrared photometry was used to estimate colours and produce stellar light curves. Based on mid-infrared colour, CO line, and near-infrared variability characteristics, the objects were divided into four categories of distinct stellar and/or circumstellar properties. Various circumstellar CO line characteristics are presented and compared between the categories, such as morphologies and extents of brightness distributions (BDs), line profiles (LPs), line intensity ratios, and kinematics. A majority of the objects form a homogenous group with sharply, centrally peaked BDs and LPs of the soft-parabola type, while the rest show extended and complex BDs and/or LPs with high-velocity wings. The C$^{18}$O line and ALMA continuum detection rates vary significantly between the categories. CO line emission is also detected from interaction zones where the expanding circumstellar gas meets the interstellar medium.

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Figures reproduced from arXiv: 2605.26605 by B.A. Sargent, E. De Beck, H. Olofsson, J.A.D.L. Blommaert, J.H. Kastner, M.A.T. Groenewegen, M. Maercker, N. Patel, N. Ryde, R. Unnikrishnan, S. Muller, S. Srinivasan, T. Khouri, W.H.T. Vlemmings.

Figure 1
Figure 1. Figure 1: Sample objects in two colour-colour diagrams based on [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p004_1.png] view at source ↗
Figure 2
Figure 2. Figure 2: ALMA data. First row: Maximum-intensity 12CO(3–2) images of objects with centrally peaked brightness distributions and with only weak extended emission (OH359.011−0.116 is suspected to be affected by CSM/ISM interaction; see text for details). Second row: Line profiles of 12CO(3–2) for the same objects (aperture 2′′, except OH359.011−0.116 for which 0′′ .15 is used). Third row: Maximum-intensity 12CO(3–2) … view at source ↗
Figure 3
Figure 3. Figure 3: Distribution of periods for the objects with large ampli [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p006_3.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 4. Figure 4: Azimuthally averaged radial brightness profiles of [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p007_4.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 5. Figure 5: Line intensity ratio distributions of 12CO for SSP (blue), SSnP (green), DSnP (yellow), and DCnP (cyan) objects plotted on top of each other. The line intensity ratios are (2−1)/(1−0) (solid), (3−2)/(2−1) (dotted), and (4−3)/(3−2) (crossed) [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p009_5.png] view at source ↗
Figure 6
Figure 6. Figure 6: Spectra of 12CO 1−0, 2−1, and 3−2, and 13CO 2−1 and 3−2 towards OH358.052+1.304 (black histogram) and the best shell-line-profile fits (Eq. 3, red solid line) with line-shape parameters H = −0.62, −0.92, −1.0, −0.48, and −0.35, respec￾tively. The 1′′ data were used. This is an average object in our sample in terms of CO line intensity strengths. erage and standard deviation are 15 ± 4 km s−1 . This is a re… view at source ↗
Figure 7
Figure 7. Figure 7: Gas expansion velocities of the AGB CSEs of SSP (blue), [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p010_7.png] view at source ↗

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